Tuesday, October 09, 2007

The Competition - Introduction

I'm supposed to be instilling a sense of paranoia with this one. A creapiness that comes with the idea that what we consume everyday is not really what it is supposed to be.
During the last story; A story basically about Sugar I spilt beer on my keyboard and had to purchase a new one. The new one isn't that great and the 'o' key needs to be hit really hard.
When rereading and editing this I found all the 'o' s missing which was disconcerting.
I like the story, it's a little to extreme to submit it too anything though.

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